For those of you that aren't on Facebook/missed the posts, I announced that the title of my book is
Coast to Coast.
My characters are........
Emerson and Logan.......and maybe Shane. I also said I would share my intro chapter. Those of you not on Facebook, NEED to sign up for my blog, then you can get my recent writing adventures sent right to your email inbox.
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So here I go. My intro is out there for the public.
Enjoy !
I slowly start to awaken. I roll over on my other side and grasp the
comforter over my shoulders up to my chin.
A gentle breeze billows the curtains from the balcony door. It was a warm enough morning, but I could
feel a chill that signaled the impending fall.
The sheer curtains just barely allowed the first rays of dawn to seep
into the room. I look across to the
other bed and see Jessica still fast asleep.
I hold my breath for a moment and listen for sounds of others stirring
in the house. Silence. Except for the waves breaking on the shore
outside, I seem to be the only thing alive at this early hour. I lay my head back down on the pillow and
exhale. Maybe I’ll just stay here a
little longer and enjoy the peace before I’m forced to start my day.
Suddenly, terror seized my body. Memories of last night’s events come crashing
through my head. I pull the comforter
completely over my head and squeeze my eyes shut. How could I have been lulled by this false
sense of peace and serenity for even a moment?
I had to go. If I waited too long
the others would be waking up and that would mean too many questions. And I couldn’t see any logical answers
presenting themselves any time soon. No,
I had to leave now. Get back home and
start living my new life. I knew things
were going to change after this summer anyways, so I should have been
prepared. I guess I expected to be able
to wade in slowly from the shallow end though, not be thrown into the deep with
a force strong enough to drown a person.
I jump out of bed and pull my
suitcase out from underneath it. I
quickly dress in some jeans and a tee shirt from my dresser drawer. I dump the rest of the drawer in the suitcase. I only need to take some essentials to get me
started. I’ll get the rest later. As I pull my hair back in a messy ponytail I
hear Jessica stirring. She’s going to
hate me for leaving like this. Once
again escaping, not wanting to deal with any awkward situations and not even
saying goodbye to her.
“What do
you think you’re doing?” Jessica murmurs as she sits up in bed.
“I’m
leaving. You know I can’t deal with any of this right now. It was already
complicated and I was unsure about my decision. After everything that went down
last night… well, it’s for the better. Now I don’t have to choose. They made it
easy. Now I don’t want anything to do with either of them.”
“You’ve got
to be joking. Emerson, you can’t fool me. I know you loved him, and I know you
still do. You might try to convince yourself that you don’t, but I know
better.”
I glare at
her. “Nice try Jess. I don’t even know
which one you’re talking about.”
“You know
perfectly well who I’m talking about.” She beams a smile at me. “Now, slow down
and take a breath. Your flight doesn’t leave for hours. Let’s have some breakfast
then I’ll help you pack while we think of what you’re going to say to him. That
way you can face the next phase of your life like a grownup, head on, no
regrets. Emerson, you’re never gonna make it out there if you keep hiding from
every uncomfortable situation you find yourself stuck in. You’re not a kid
anymore. You can’t just pull the blanket over your head and pretend the outside
world doesn’t exist. It’s time to…”
We’re
interrupted by a timid knocking at the door.
I freeze. Any courage Jessica
just infused in me had immediately flooded out with the sound of his knuckles
gently tapping against oak. It was
him. It had to be, right? Wait, was I actually excited that he might be
here, coming here for me, ready to apologize or forgive, whichever way you
wanted to look at it we certainly had unfinished business to deal with. Maybe it wasn’t him. What if it was…
“No, I just
can’t deal with him yet, “ I whisper. “Tell him I already left and I’ll call
him tonight once I’m back at the apartment. I’m sorry Jess. I’m just not as
strong as you. I need that blanket a little longer.” I give her a little hug,
grab my suitcase off the bed, and dodge out the patio door to the balcony and
the stairs that lead to the beach below.
But as I reach the top stair some invisible force stops me from
descending. Curiosity gets the best of
me and even though I don’t want to talk to him, I kind of want to hear what he
has to say. I stand on the balcony, out
of view of the glass patio doors, which are still cracked open. Jess answers the door and I listen.
“Is she
here? I really need to talk to her. Maybe you can help me. She always did
listen to you.”
Wow. Not at all the voice I expected to hear. I really should go in and just face him. I take a deep breath and set my suitcase
down. Alright Emerson, it’s time to come
out from under the blanket. I close my
eyes, take another deep breath, and reach for the door. I pull it open completely and stand in its
frame.
“OK, go
ahead and talk. Say whatever you need to. I don’t like what’s going on and I
don’t understand how it all came to this. So maybe you can shed some light on
it for me. Go ahead. I’ll listen.”
4 comments:
Ok now I wanna know more... :) good job Lisa.
~ Elena
Very good first chapter. Sounds like an interesting book.
> Portia (your old co-worker)
Great job Lisa, I can't wait to read more!!!
Sharon
Ahh, what a cliffhanger! I want to read more! :)
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